GenkaiZero

@Broly_boi65 Thank you :) Unfortunately, that is not an option at the moment due to future uncertainties. However, I am still making edits, art, and plans. I look forward to getting back to writing when I am able to. :)

@GenkaiZero looks great! Hope to see an update whenever you have the time. I know I’m not the only one 

@Broly_boi65 I made an alteration to the title box. Do you think it is an improvement? :)

@GralAlvarez   Thank you :)  ❤️

@ GralAlvarez  Yeah! Even tho he is a little more reserved he still has that "smugness" and charismatic aura that the og Hit has. I'm really happy with the way the story progress so i hope you are proud of yourself :D

@GralAlvarez No worries! :) Great English, considering that you are self taught. :) Happy I hopefully did Hit justice.
            
            Glad that you find that he is in-character and not too strong. It's quite a difficult juggling act.
            
            I always love balanced growth in stories. The protagonists can get tens of times stronger, but there will always be an enemy to rival them and even obliterate them initially. Where's the fun if you know the main character will always win? (Although, I definitely like one punch man)
            
            I do sometimes wonder whether I have made Hit a little less apathetic than he usually would be, but it's difficult to have him involve himself in the story otherwise :P 
            
            We did see that he was becoming far more expressive after only a few short moments with Goku, in particular, and others in the TOP.

@GenkaiZero It’s cool. Just really wanted to know if you wanted the story updated. Hope you handle your hurdles first and get some rest in between.

@Broly_boi65 Thank you :) I will continue it eventually, but need to get through real life hurdles first. The break will be longer this time for that reason. Apologies; I really do wish I could write more.
            
            I have everything planned out until the fourth season, which would be the climax of Hit's journey. I'll have to watch season 5, but based on what I have heard will occur, Hit's not going to stand for a certain someone's crazed infatuation.
            
            I also have Hit's hot spring ova on my profile. Occurs between season 1 and 2.

i am not disappointed and thanks for  your answer

@21496gg Hello   Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
            
            I like to focus on writing one story at a time, and would really only consider beginning another serious fanfiction when I finish Hit's story, whenever that may be. Another idea I had was a human reincarnated into Danmachi who eventually gains access to a modified version of ki, where they can emulate techniques. It would be quite a slow evolution, since they'd be an average modern age guy. He'd start by learning to survive in the wilderness and carry cartons of milk like kid goku once he reaches Orario.
            
            I definitely think Jiren deserves more love and fanfics though, and I would definitely consider it. Writing about Danmachi so many times would get repetitive, so perhaps he could be transmigrated/reincarnated into another verse. Maybe jobless reincarnation? Who knows, maybe I could find a novel place for him in Danmachi.
            
            Jiren would almost certainly be more op at the start than Hit, and the story would revolve around him forming bonds, taking inspiration from Goku.
            
            Anyway, I hope you aren't too disappointed.
            Your English is fine:)

@SuVida777 No problem :)
            Have read the first two chapters, plus the science, and I'm enjoying it so far:)
            
            Poor Evanna :( Your description of her revulsion at being tricked into eating pork made the scene quite impactful. Was not expecting that. Also enjoyed your descriptions of the scenes, which is my favourite part of writing.
            
            I do not normally read stories other than anime fanfiction on wattpad/ao3/ffnet. Unfortunately, the vast majority are unfinished, including my own, and I cannot seem to find ones that fit my specific tastes: where the characters feel realistic and undergo novel adventures and challenges, rather than simple canon retellings or overused smut/harems. That is what compelled me to begin writing my story, along with my favourite fics.
            
            Your story has made me realise that there is far more to enjoy on here.

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@GenkaiZero well, after reading jesusxjudas, this is stupid but not that stupid, good chapters

@Redkin33  :)  glad you enjoyed 

I don’t exactly remember the names but there’s one where he’s reincarnated into sengran kagura (i think it’s called that) in fanfiction 

@Macaque0418 Thank you  Hit deserves far more love! Yes, there are many side characters that deserve their own stories.
            
            I'm glad you liked it, and I hope I can update in some time. Please understand that I write when I feel motivated and happy to do so; I treat it as a hobby after all, and it will take some time.  I wish I had more energy.
            
            What are your top 2? Would be nice to read.