Geo_Flower

Been tired and busy last few weeks but I am trying to work on my stories, primarily writing my Shadow the Hedgehog one and editing my StandStill Bonds one. I had another YuGiOh 5Ds story (When the Engines Sing) some of you might have gotten to read but I unpublished it for now a while back as I hit a heavy writers block with it but it hasn't been deleted! ^^

CureStarlight

By the way how did u create the story did u get inspire by the girl name Molly on Sonic X I noticed there resemblance from Sonic X she got same job description she jet pilot as well I just hope her death won’t be involve I would love some happy ending for her I still remember her episode how it ended 

Geo_Flower

@CureStarlight I don't know how often I will be able to update exactly due to irl commitments and stuff, sometimes I take long breaks, sometimes I'm able to get a few up relatively quickly just depends on my free time I get. I don't do book requests sadly, sorry about that.
            And yep, Shadow is definitely the type at this time not to want anyone around, he trusts Rouge and Omega here because he's known them for a few years, and to a certain extent he trusts Commander Walters too, he isn't intentionally cruel to Molly because he wants to be, but there will be a big degree of tension as he tries his best to ignore her and make comments to make her want to not be around. She's passive at first, but she will push back at some point as she did with Angie... watch this space ^_^
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CureStarlight

That was a great idea I started to love the story how often will u update I already finish reading it so u thing u can do 30 chapter for this book I understand why Shadow doesn’t want to get attach to anyone I just hope he won’t treat her that badly as he does to anyone else I just hope it gives him some resemblance to Maria shadow happen to be my favorite character u should off added what if Molly was born with powers something that she doesn’t know I was wondering if u do request book after ur done with this one 
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Geo_Flower

@CureStarlight YES! That's exactly who she's inspired by, I kept thinking of adding that to the summary of the story but I think at first I figured people would assume/realise that was the case as you have guessed so, but I will put that in so people know ^. Its also why I haven't added OC as a tag or labeled her as that since technically it isn't, I've just taken her character and changed/adapted her into this AU story of the movie's universe, given her a unique backstory etc (and a last name as she didnt have one in the show I dont think) ^^
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CureStarlight

Hey I noticed u just posted the same chapter 7 for shadow the hedgehog story with Molly Reed I already read chapter 07 was there something wrong with it by the way ur story is awesome how many chapter will there be 

Geo_Flower

@CureStarlight I sometimes go back and edit chapters I've published cause I'm nitpicky like that lol especially if I'd uploaded them late at night or after midnight or something I go back and check them. ^
            Thank you so much! I'm not certain how many chapters there will be, I have the idea for beginning middle and end and I fill it in and connect as I go, sometimes spending shorter or longer in some parts than I intended. Anyone's guess really lol. I'd suspect at least 20 chapters though, with my JoJo story some chapters were really short, I'm trying to make them longer, at least 1500-2000+ 
            I hope it continues to be a good read for you, thank you for reading and your kind words! ^^
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Geo_Flower

Been tired and busy last few weeks but I am trying to work on my stories, primarily writing my Shadow the Hedgehog one and editing my StandStill Bonds one. I had another YuGiOh 5Ds story (When the Engines Sing) some of you might have gotten to read but I unpublished it for now a while back as I hit a heavy writers block with it but it hasn't been deleted! ^^

Geo_Flower

So I've decided to chang the stand names of a few characters, namely Hiroshi's and the two supporting antagonists. Love spontaneous late night decisions. 
          In fact one of the villains, Aoi, I realised I didn't even name his stand lol
          
          Hiroshi's stand; Steel Light to Electric Light Orchestra
          Ankoku's stand; Cruciare to Morbid Angel
          Aoi's stand; Savage Garden

Geo_Flower

This is for Standstill Bonds btw, gotta love my late night brain at the time not thinking to specify that when this was a conversation post, not a note on the chapters lol
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Geo_Flower

Still revising Standstill Bonds a lot as I started reading it again and wanting to change little things like how I worded some stuff, spelling mistakes etc. using AO3 since I've been doing it mostly on mobile (and trying to edit on wattpad mobile I find a nightmare, it keeps auto scrolling to top and bottom), then I notice today my italics and bold lines there don't follow over. So with all that, the 'publish' dates are all gonna be very recent as I try and speed through editing them here ahhhhhhhhhh, wish Wattpad had a backdate feature for chapters cause it just looks so odd

Cronotrigger44

I just finished your 5D's story and mann the feels ahhhh but thank you for allowing me to read it! Been getting that itch back for YGO in the form of Master Duel haha

Geo_Flower

@Cronotrigger44 It's still wild to me that ppl are still finding, reading and enjoying that story. So happy you liked it, thank you for reading! I don't do much to do with Yu-Gi-Oh these days so I aint up to speed lol. But have fun with your Yu-Gi-Oh stuff!
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Geo_Flower

My story Standstill Bonds is going under some polishing/refinement. I love it but reading back over it I just really wanna improve the writing a bit where I'm just feeling not 100% satisfied. You don't need to re-read it if you've already read and enjoyed it (unless you wish to of course)., the story itself isn't changing, just tryin to improve upon it, maybe add some details here n there. 
          
          Thx guys!

MichelleObendorfer

Hey you, I really like your Yu-Gi-Oh 5'Ds story, one of my favorite series, Yu-Gi-Oh was part of my childhood and I'm still enjoying playing the TCG and Master Duel :3 

MichelleObendorfer

@ Geo_Flower  Hey there! Yeah, I always loved the original Yu-Gi-Oh series, I literally play this game since I was a little kid and yeah, 5Ds and Vrains (where they play Link monsters) are also my favorites!! You're welcome:3 
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Geo_Flower

@MichelleObendorfer Hi there, I'm so glad you liked it! My enjoyment of yugioh doesn't really go beyond Duel Monsters and 5DS. I just didn't get into the other series but I still hold an appreciation for it. Thanks so much for your kind words about my story :3
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