ErnestinaBortey
Like your story
GeoshSun
GeoshSun
NEW rewrite! Comments/feedback appreciated, even begged for
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Dear Son,
If you are reading this letter:
1. We are dead.
2. You are currently wondering who you are and what your name is.
3. You're probably in a hospital. If so, they will be coming for you any moment now...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/298302175-the-fifth-healer
leiana52
@GeoshSun She's blunt, focused on the facts, direct, and not as concerned about emotions. Some women do tend toward that side—but the general female default is toward emotions, especially in high-stress situations. Ainsley shows *zero* fear in chapter 7, when she's just been kidnapped and has found herself next to a strange boy for an undetermined amount of time. It's unnatural for her to be at *least* a little nervous.
GeoshSun
ALL NEW REWRITE!
I've switched from multiple third POV to first. Our narrator is now the undisputed crowd favorite, the white haired, Victorian-style clothed, amnesia-suffering Chronopathic magic wielder Nikolai Sterling.
You're welcome
https://www.wattpad.com/story/298302175-the-fifth-healer
Lihn_Song
I just finished Bolt and i think it is so lovely and you are very stellar and cool :D
GeoshSun
Just marked this story COMPLETE
Complete with twists you never saw coming.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/328761128-heists-for-hire-an-action-thriller
RBecMarie
Oh no, now I’m going to end up binge reading this instead of being productive this morning! Haha
GeoshSun
HOT OFF THE PRESS....3 new chapters!
uh-oh! law enforcement is closing in
https://www.wattpad.com/story/328761128-heists-for-hire-an-action-thriller
GeoshSun
Chapter 14 is here....oh snap, those flashing are lights closing in
https://www.wattpad.com/story/328761128-heists-for-hire-an-action-thriller
GeoshSun
Just dropped Chapter 13....whoa....is this ANOTHER antagonist?!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/328761128-heists-for-hire-an-action-thriller
GeoshSun
Hi followers!
You all asked for more chapters.
Well, I’ve added them. And I’m writing more!
Thank you for following and for reading. You can’t put emoji in these posts, but if I could, I’d add prayer hands here.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/328761128-heists-for-hire-an-action-thriller
GeoshSun
NEW CHAPTERS!
NOW A COMPLETED ONE-SHOT!
"Felix Bolt specializes in smuggling and infiltration jobs others find impossible.
His secret, unknown to his dark web employers, is that he conceals an arsenal of tools and weapons in a customized prosthetic leg..."
https://www.wattpad.com/story/328761128-heists-for-hire-an-action-thriller