GoodLuckWritingThat

You're very welcome! I really, really love your story! I've just recently started getting into reading cellphone novels, and I'm extremely glad that I got to read yours as one of my first tries at it! *\(^o^)/*
            
            Although you did mention that this story was written purely for fun, and that you didn't have a very good grasp of the rules of writing cellphone novels in the foreword, somehow, reading this story just makes my day better, especially with the way that Asami's developing feelings towards Kumo are described. It's simple, but the way it's expressed gives it so much more meaning. ^_^ Also, the unique word placements make the story really engaging and interesting, and made me want to keep reading on! 
            
            Regardless of why this story came about, I'm really grateful that you took a leap of faith and published it here on Wattpad. After reading it, I've actually felt inspired to try writing a cellphone novel of my own, even though it's totally different from what I usually write! Thank you so, so much for deciding to do this, and please keep doing your best in writing your story! Can't wait to read the next chapter~~ o(^▽^)o

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P. P. S. If you want a summarise version of that long paragraph, just know that it was no problem at all to vote for you story and that I loved it! :)

I love it! Your writing is amazing, and the way your words are in different positions, like how the dialogue was on the right side in one of the chapters, adds to the overall effect of each awesome chapter! And I especially love how you jump back and forth between two different timelines in the story, and how the narrator is making comparisons between things back then and now. Makes the sentimental part of my soul want to complain how unfair love is! Keep up the good work, and hopefully one day you'll watch your writing make it to the top of the writing world! 
            
            P. S. Zac Efron? Vanessa Hudgens? I'm kind of getting a not-so-subtle High School Musical vibe here... *grins*

Glad to see I'm making someone's day! 

Honk to you as well. 

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Right back at ya.

@MikaelaBender honk

@Mistalee_ honk

I like how you made your book short and sweet, with a beautiful ending to each chapter. Your story revolved around their meeting through the rain and an umbrella, and how they continued to build on their relationship from then on. I also liked how you ended Chapter 4. Your way of showing that the duo managed to communicate efficiently through music was clearly and beautifully expressed at the end. Your grammar needs a littleeeee work, but other than that, your story was amazing. 
            
            All in all: I LOVED YOUR STORY AND IT. WAS. AMAZING. 
            
            P. S. Love Shawn's sass! ;)

@descents honk

I did! Those little conversations really made me realise how a few words can express deep meanings with so much emotion. It really gave me something to think about. :)

@galaxygazes honk

@descents bonk

@_pure_imagination_ bonk

No problem. You did a great job in writing a science fiction book that had me addicted to it from the moment I read the first chapter! :)

@lets-defeat-the-huns i am bonk

Your story is more of a bomb than I am. Thanks for letting me read a great story!