Wow. Absolutely wow. Finished Unfinished Script, I couldn't imagine writing something so technical. I'm almost too happy it didn't follow conventional route and I thank you for not writing a wedding scene.
My only possible criticism, King and Iron Duchess end situation their connection, little murky... Possibly more explicit dive into the topic or flashbacks of where he acted on this new discovered behaviour. Its hard to write without spoiling but get the point across to those who have read it lol
