Heard, understood and acknowledged:)
I am fairly new to all this so I really appreciate your comment:D
I did tweak the chapters a little, its still work in progress.
My main character (Zachary) and his involvement with Kate is the mystery of my book which I will reveal in the following chapters. My starting chapters are a tad bit slower than the rest, there is no denying it. If there is anything more I should know about then please let me know:)) Thank you.
Cheers mate!