@GgRoganGhSprina24
The first two chapters of the Blueprint of Us are posted… mid August I’ll begin posted … a second story that’s a rewrite of Out of the blue called Love on Solid Grounds and I’ve a third story that won’t start posting until it’s completed.
After 2 years: while likely getting a new title I’m Better with you I’d bring rewritten : New outline premise of the rewriting:
Logan and Rory married after his accident in his senior year of college, this story begins 10 yrs later. While Rory said no when Logan proposed I'm setting Hamburg six years after Rory's graduation. Manipulation by Lorelei and something else will factor into why Rory forgets I. the marriage Logan won't but he'll be aware of the second factor behind Rory's short term memory loss surrounding their wedding, accident with Lorelei as the driver. I'll take suggestions from reader but ultimately I'm keeping Rory and Logan together. Odette won't be a negative character she'll be in love with Tristan Logan's cousin just have issues... as in original version. Look probably in July for the first two chapters. Colin will be with Lane, Finn will be with Stephanie and Madeline (from Chilton) will be paired with either Jesse who joins the group or Seth while Robert will be paired with Lindsey Dean's ex...'m adding a twist into how and why Lindsey and Rory are friends.
Please let me know what you guys think... I'm focusing on one story this time around.
@GgRoganGhSprina24
What new twist would you guys like to see besides alcoholism to account for Lorelei's behavior ?
Mental health issue
Pure hatred of society
Lorelei as a parent who left while amidst legal custody battle
Other please suggest in comments
Preview of chapter one Out new title and all for I’m better with you…now renamed, the blueprint of Us
I'm thinking of a twist to the end of season 7 where Rory and Logan have the secret she doesn't remember but are still in each other's lives.. aka Hamburg. But with a twist that explains Paul and Jesse... I'm thinking possible Lorelei hand selecting Rory's supposed boyfriends but also to explain why she basically treated especially Paul like he didn't matter
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l've a poll up on part 4 as I'm not entirely sure what to do with the Lorelei twist... i know there will be more revolve between Rory and Lorelei than the show really gave us require how different mother and daughter were even through a year in the life kind of messed with that difference...my struggle is what the divide should be because that will address the resolve. Im also thinking the fic needs a new title.