Ghodrix

I miss Lyric and Shou! I kind of want to remake the story but I'm worried you guys won't like it nearly as much or you'll get mad that it's different. I just feel like I could've done the story so much better and made it a lot more mature, and I really love my baby boys. I miss puppy-dog Lyric and grumpy kitten Shou, they're so cute. Lyric is outwardly so energetic and happy and gets embarrassed and sad and is really emotional, but in the sheets and when someone he loves is threatened he's confident and strong and loving and not afraid to take lead. Shou is very reclusive and independent to a fault, and rarely gets upset that he has no friends or family. He's happy to be alone until he meets Lyric. Shou is cocky and mischievous, but in the sheets and in dire situations he's a trembling kitten, putty in your hands. I miss themmmm.

blueroseace

@Ghodrix , If you feel that you want to revamp the story I highly doubt that people will get upset. A lot of people recreate their stories and leave the general personalities of their characters so that the readers can still make a connection from that. The main thing is that is you want to change the story BECAUSE you are embarrassed by your writing style, that is up to you. I would love to see your own new personal writing style, as it would be a real joy to read! Also people have opinions, and if they decide to criticize your work just because you wanted to add a new style to it then they need to find a new hobby. I hope your writing goes well!!
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Great_Long_Hot_Dog

@Ghodrix This is a bit late, but if remaking it is what you want, then feel free to do so! This was and is your story, and even if people wouldn't like the ideas and plot of a recreation, I promise, other people will love it. We all have different tastes, and changing pieces always leaves people feeling turned off by a story/show remake. Don't be discouraged by it. Do what you want to.
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Ghodrix

I miss Lyric and Shou! I kind of want to remake the story but I'm worried you guys won't like it nearly as much or you'll get mad that it's different. I just feel like I could've done the story so much better and made it a lot more mature, and I really love my baby boys. I miss puppy-dog Lyric and grumpy kitten Shou, they're so cute. Lyric is outwardly so energetic and happy and gets embarrassed and sad and is really emotional, but in the sheets and when someone he loves is threatened he's confident and strong and loving and not afraid to take lead. Shou is very reclusive and independent to a fault, and rarely gets upset that he has no friends or family. He's happy to be alone until he meets Lyric. Shou is cocky and mischievous, but in the sheets and in dire situations he's a trembling kitten, putty in your hands. I miss themmmm.

blueroseace

@Ghodrix , If you feel that you want to revamp the story I highly doubt that people will get upset. A lot of people recreate their stories and leave the general personalities of their characters so that the readers can still make a connection from that. The main thing is that is you want to change the story BECAUSE you are embarrassed by your writing style, that is up to you. I would love to see your own new personal writing style, as it would be a real joy to read! Also people have opinions, and if they decide to criticize your work just because you wanted to add a new style to it then they need to find a new hobby. I hope your writing goes well!!
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Great_Long_Hot_Dog

@Ghodrix This is a bit late, but if remaking it is what you want, then feel free to do so! This was and is your story, and even if people wouldn't like the ideas and plot of a recreation, I promise, other people will love it. We all have different tastes, and changing pieces always leaves people feeling turned off by a story/show remake. Don't be discouraged by it. Do what you want to.
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Ghodrix

I feel like Lyric is the type of guy to be like that teen from the cringe compilation who makes a video proclaiming his undying love to his girlfriend and says the following: "I love you more than every grain of sand on every beach of every island of every ocean on every planet in every galaxy in the universe."

Ghodrix

Chapter two of Lumin has been posted! It's over 2,600 words, which is practically half of my Bite Me Hard story. Be proud of meee! Also, as a spoiler, there will be sexy times in the next chapter. c; Enjoy!

Ghodrix

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Okay more seriously, I wrote a new story! <3 I'm pretty damn excited about it, Sulris and Lumin are pretty great main characters and I have the whole story planned out in my head. There's action, betrayal, sex, and a whole lot of supernatural shit. My writing is amateur level, so I'm sorry the beginning sucks pretty bad, but I promise it'll get better the more I write. Please check out my new story "Lumin.", you guys will surely love it as much as I do! <3 If you have any questions, DM me!