For || LONGING || I was thinking of going over the story to re-write the plotline a bit more as it has come to my attention that I have stuck to the film word for word with my own additional chapters and don't feel as though it's very original - I won't be taking it down, I'll just be re-updating my chapters. Alongside that, if anyone would like to give me some advice on my story and in any way, shape, or form can improve it, please, don't hesitate to tell me - maybe even tell me what you'd like to see in the future for Arizona etc.