A Rare Elf! Good story, but as you already said in the last chapter, it was a bit rushed. So, my suggestion, idk how long ago that you wrote that but I've read one of your other stories and it was written a bit better that this one, so maybe rewrite it in the future or fix the parts that are rushed and have grammar mistakes. Like I said already, it's a good book, but with a bit more tlc, it can be even better! I'm looking forward to rereading it if you decide to rewrite tho!!! Great job tho auth!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️5 rounds of applause for your efforts!!!!!^v^