GinaBelmonte

Hey @ginabelmonte if you can, could you check out my story and maybe vote and follow me (; It'd mean a lot! 

Hey there!! I just wanted to ask if you would mind reading my short story, "dreams are his salvation?" If it's not a problem and probably give me some feedback? Thanks

@imagination101 :)) a humble writer too... Great to be a fan of someone with talent and character 

@GinaBelmonte lol, no need for that :)  I just enjoy reading and writing.  There just isn't anything worth watching on tv these days.  When I was younger I remember shows like "The Cosby Show" and "Growing Pains" .. "Miami Vice" and "21 Jump Street".. I was an 80's kid and looked forward to prime time television... now, there just isn't that much to see anymore.

@imagination101 whew! I was really hoping I won't offend you. Wow! You have a full fledged life and you still write so many books to boot even. I take a humble bow.

@GinaBelmonte No, I didn't take it as rude at all.  I relish in any sort of feedback that I can get and you put it across very tastefully.  That's why I responded back because I hoped you would expand a little for me :).  I'm a full time mother and work a 40 hour work week as a real estate paralegal.  I've just recently started writing over  the last two years and even I can tell there is a huge difference from the first story I wrote and the one's I'm writing now.  "Love and Lies" is actually a re-make of one of my first stories.  Feel free any time you want to point something out... I like trying to spread my wings.  It's the only way to get better :)
          
          I"ll go back to my character sketches and see what I can do to differentiate them... or make them as more of a stronger character.
          
          Thanks!
          
          Tara

@imagination101 Hi Tara. Thinking my remark might be rude I had actually deleted it. You see I read blood bound, taming the tycoon and love and lies. And I noticed that each of these three books revolve around a similar plot where the male leads and female leads have a kind of keeping the distance but are sexually attracted to each other. The male leads are quite similar to each other and do not create a strong impact. You have a huge following and I m sure no one has told u that. Maybe it's me. I'm a newbie to Wattpad. Most writers here use the same plot in their stories. I will read the books just for passing time but not something which I would hold dearly to. I apologize if what I say is offensive of you may. It even agree with me. But as a writer it might be good to spread your wings wide and take risks. So far I have found only one writer in Wattpad who seems to write a little differently from the rest here. I'm sorry again. Maybe it's just me and my expectations. I know there are a couple of writers who made it big outside of Wattpad after they started to write here. I hope you would too. 

Hi, I got your message in my email and I'm not offended at all.  I actually welcome and constructive criticism that I can get. I was hoping you could explain further... when you say same tussles between the leading characters, can you explain a little further?  I've very interested in your thoughts... Thanks, Tara