@fallawaybroken OMG! Very, very good!!! I just read "Ghosts From My Past" & am totally hooked just like I get reading a full-fledged published book!
And, yes, I have a published book! Just a small publishing house, no agent, not much promoting done for my book, but it is published! I'm writing Book 2 in the series now.
I am very impressed with your writing! I don't know how "deep" you want me to get with my comments...but I really like it!! Your writing improved once you got into a few chapters. The flow & dialogue & how you break up a scene - fantastic! Don't stop!
Gina