Girliegirl2007133

i have returned from my long trip to nowhere. I have been gone and havent visited wattpad in a while and i came back to almost 1k notifications.
          	Why wattpad
          	just
          	why
          	so :P im back

Shuel786

Read it  all!↓
          
          ↓I mean it!↓
          
          ↓Read it all!↓
          
          If you were killed, I wouldn't be at your funeral.
          
          I'd be in jail for killing the person who killed you.
          
          We are true friends.
          
          We ride together, we die together.
          
          Send this to everybody you care about, including me, if you care.
          
          See how many times u get this.
          
          I want you to know you are an amazing friend, till death and forever.
          
          If I don't get this back, I understand.
          
          But I have a game for you.
          
          Once you read this letter,
          
          you must send this to 15 people, including me.
          
          If you get at least three back, you are loved.
          
          Nobody knows how important something is, until they lose it.
          
          Tonight, (right at 12:00pm) the person you love will realize they love you.
          
          Then, at 1:00pm to 2:00pm, be ready for the shock of yourlife!
          
          If you break this chain, you will have bad luck.
          
          With love, send this to the 15
          If you don't, you will turn ugly in one year.
          
          A friend told me to do this, so past it on.
          
          Tomorrow, two boys/girls will ask if they can I have your number?
          
          Send this message to 15 nice, people or bad luck starts for a whole year.
          
          This is not fake.
          
          Apparently, if you copy and paste this, you will have the best day of your life tomorrow Good luck
          
          Oh! And don’t send this to a server!

Girliegirl2007133

Can you give me some advice on this story concept. Any and all advice is welcome.
          1. A story centers around a girl named amelia, who has many phobias. One night she was kidnapped, and when she awoke she was in a lab faving a group of scientists who asked her to partake in an expirement, If she didnt she wouldb be let go, if she did the expirement she would get a cash prize of 10,000,00$. She agrees and the scientists insert her into a simulation called Phobia. Once inside she starts to wonder what will happen. She soon realizes that things arent what they seem. Now she has to survive for 24 hours in each phobia to survive.
          Title: Phobia

Girliegirl2007133

Thank you
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findingconfidence

It sounds really cool, but I feel like for something of that scale with the 24 hour thing, it should have a cash prize more like, 105 per hour, which is still an incredible offer. Also, for the simulation and all the doctors, you should make it really clear what they’re trying to find out from the experiment so that they seem more legitimate. It’s a really great concept, so I hope you continue to refine it and fall in love with the world you’re creating.
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Girliegirl2007133

Thank for the support.
            Unless its just puttong pictures j have a little anxiety when it comes to wroting stories so it might be. A while before i write it
            Hope tou dont mind!
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