@GiuseppeLipardi Hiiii Actually, you are really nice. May writers are Scary.. And most of the time I won't comment anything, good or bad, because the writer and reads will gang up on the commenter and they only thing you can think of is to run with your tail between your legs. :P... No jocking. I've seen how sometimes everyone becomes a horrible bully. People and writers many times think a comment is attacking them and they aren't mature enough, like you, I must say, to know that commenting on a character or event is not saying the book is bad. If a character is built evil then it will tricker discomfort for the reader. If that happens, and if it was the writer's intention, then it means they did good writing it. Of course there are horrible stories, not only the spilling and grammar, but the whole thing.
I like "the road to the greatest evil is paved in good intentions". You should how everyone is a user. Governments, police, etc.. or we wouldn't have injustice and forgotten. You have a good approach and smart.. You will see more comments from me. The story tricker all the pain that either hair about or experience ourselves. The truth is most of the sex trafficking victims never get out until they are dead. And most humans live and die without being known. Disappear from memories when their families are dying too. You didn't create something bad.
and just so I can feel good and hope fantacy is better in real life where good is picky, maybe have another book where Pawel gets out of all of this, be with his family, be the striaght gut he thinks and wants, have a wife, be out of being a slave... and maybe a story about Bobby. I am just sooo sad. have you seen or read real people and events that they go through this? it is horrible ....
