I'm new around here and have never written a book before so all kinds of feedback (no matter how brutal) is welcome, of course there is no need to be unnecessarily rude or mean.
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Story by Gladius04
Sunset Invasion
Set in late 1300s Galicia a boy named Alfonso finds himself in the middle of the collision of 2 worlds separa...
