Glambertden

Next chapter of my KakaIru zombie-fic is out and so I ask you again: If you found any mistake, please, let me know! I can't fix it if I don't know about it, and so I can't become better in English! Thank you (:

Glambertden

I just uploaded the first chapter (actually it's a prologue, but who cares, right?) of my KakaIru zombie-fic. I write it originally in my first language, which is Czech, and then translate it to English for English speaking fans of KakaIru and possible readers of this story. I know it's not perfect, and I kinda need help from all of you who speak English regularly.
          Please, may I ask you to kick me in the butt, if there's like a lot of mistakes that need to be fixed? For each notified mistake, you can get one virtual internet coockie! (;