Road2Woodbury

Hi. I was wondering if you might be interested in checking out my survival book about the apocalypse called The Price Of Admission ❤

Glisteningopal

@Road2Woodbury I will :)
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Road2Woodbury

No problem, I understand being busy but just saying you'll take even a moment is appreciated ❤
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Glisteningopal

:)
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alone_storm

Hey can you check out my book Tied to the Prince

Glisteningopal

@alone_storm keep it up.
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alone_storm

Alright I'll try to work on that
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Glisteningopal

@alone_storm hey. I am so sorry again if i sound rude but your story is toooo "rushed". If u know what i mean. There is no proper background story or picture. Also some of your sentences are not peoper. I mean the punctuation n also a lil bit of grammar mistakes. Try to separate the sentences. And use punctuations to emphasise anything. I like the plot. I feel like i wanna find out what happens next but the story is not very smooth. Its too fast and comes off a little unnatural. Which is not relatable. It sounds really childish at some points. 
            
            Sorry 4 that long paragraph but I couldn't help it. Hope it's helpful 2 u.
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