r0mali3

Hello! Noticed that you didn't reply to my comment on your story so I'll message here.
          
          First off, your story's really amazing! I noticed that your punctuation and grammar are a bit off at first, but the plot was so good I had to continue reading! Looking forward to the next chapters!
          
          Secondly, your concept of having characters from another fandom having secret affiliations with the Dream SMP characters and THEN having the DSMP characters transported into the others' world is really interesting and I'd like to write something similar but with a different fandom (*cough* *cough* Beyblade Burst *cough*). I was wondering if I could have your permission?
          
          Thank you!

Glitchabyss

Yes! You have my permission to uhh get inspired by my story as long as you credit me I guess? Sorry for the late reply dude, electricity just got back but the signal is still not HAHA XD But really dude, go for it! And yeah… grammar is always a problem with me.
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NokoTheTaco

Bruh, your story is top notch entertainment. I’d like to ask how you’re able to write so much yet keep your readers so engaged. This would really help me since I’m a fledgling author on Wattpad right now, so if you had any good writing tips, that would be greatly appreciated!
          
          Great Story!

Glitchabyss

You’re welcome! I tried my best at explaining as you are kinda the first one who asked some writing tips qwq
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NokoTheTaco

Thank you so much! This is really helpful! Thanks for the writing tips!
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Glitchabyss

Also! Always do a cliffhanger! Don’t make the story short just to have a cliffhanger. I made the chapters not too short and not too long cause I thought that making the chapter long, it would be boring as there are no thrilling event quite yet. So I do it to making the readers excited, engage to the plot yet content with a not-too-short-not-too-long chapter (I mean, I think they are content with the 1000 words per chapter. Are you?).
            
            I would advice this tip if you are planning on a regular or frequent update as some of the readers might be enraged that the chapters are exciting yet slow updates. It made them a bit mad and probably would find your story uninteresting as you would keep doing a cliffhanger yet slow updates. Though it is my personal opinion and experience. And lastly! Try to be on your reader’s pov. I personally think this is a good tip. I can’t really explain much as it is obvious I think. Does it?
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