Omokehinde_
Hello, Could you check out my book titled Who Killed Bimbo? and give your honest views and comments. Thank you
GloriosaSuperba01
@Omokehinde_ First chapter of who killed Bimbo was great, save for a few errors. You really do have a knack for helping the reader vividly imagine the scene. Descriptive are your strength. However even the things we do well need tweaking every now and again, just like a good knife needs sharpening. I do feel that the scene although vividly was lacking a tad bit emotionally.
