Glory in war

Btw, what do you think of my writing style in recent stories? Be they fanfic or originals? (Excluding the extremely old stories, since I know those are bad)
          
          I'm looking for honest opinions on where you guys think I can improve and where I excell at. That way I can make stories better.
          
          Please leave em in the comments below, thanks!

Hey! Glory here. Got some big news to tell you.
          I'll be making a rewrite of my original stories! More specifically, a rewrite of the book "The Skiross Gate Incident."
          
          Due to college obligations, I am going to take some time to start it. But since Skiross is a book I like, I think a rewrite is necessary due to lore changes and criticisms on the story itself.
          
          Also, I hope you guys have a wonderful day!

Farewell and good luck, you silly little shark of Atlantis.
          
          As Zhongli once said: "You will continue to shine like gold in my memories."

I made a Gawr Gura animation.
          https://youtu.be/O7X8L7Pj6aA?si=-VHdwDhufy1F0iJY
          
          One final tribute to the shilly shark. Animated by me and colored by my friend.

To anyone who's a Gura fan, don't fret too much... Atlantis is simply calling her home.

Graduate well, Gura. Though the time has come where you will leave, you will continue to shine like gold in our memories.

A question. Sorry to bother you, but the deities you mention in your pantreon, where the god Aurelian confronted and banished them, are not the same ones that appear or are mentioned in the stories and myths of H.P. Lovecraft's books.

My midterms in College has started, so no new Genshin fanfic update for this week. Sorry guys.

Happy Valentine's day, old friends and new!
          
          Here's to a year of fortune for those who have found their significant others, and to those who have yet to find a love interest! (I know you can do it.)

@uctres Gdrive actually. But they aren't done yet since I have college to attend to.