Glorysquest

Hey glories 
          	
          	
          	I know its been a long time I updated, I was caught up in some work. I hope you understand however I will upload new chapter soon maybe tomorrow or day after tomorrow.
          	
          	Love ya

MeghaNainwaya

Happy new year Army  
          I just started writing my very first ff and I would love if you can check it out and give me your valuable feedback.
          Thank you in advance for letting me post on your profile and if you have any issues with it then feel free to ignore or delete it.
          Have a great year filled with good health, happiness and success.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/377747684?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MeghaNainwaya

Nash_Writes97

Hi.
          Sorry for just popping here out of nowhere. 
          I have read your book His Only Treasure, and I want to give you an honest review so that you can improve your writing. I am not an expert, but I hope this will help you.
          My first impression of this book is that it is impressive. It makes me want to read more and more. I must say that the plot is nice. The wording is good.  
          So, about the writing,  please use the correct punctuation marks and end the dialogue with the correct ones.
          For instance,  Yoongi shouted, "I don't care if you don't come."  (Like this, use a full stop or a coma if it's a statement. And don't give spaces before and after the quotes.)
          
          You can read famous other books and see how they presented each scene and how they use punctuation. It will surely help you a lot. I have tried this before, and I improved a lot. Just get inspired. Don't plagiarise them, alright? 
          
          I was worse than you when I started to write. But, after trying and improving my writing skills, it got better. My books got good views every day, and I felt motivated.
          
          For grammar, I recommend you use 'Grammarly.'  It will help you a lot :)
          
          I hope you don't take this negatively. 
          
          Have a nice day/night.
          
          Cheers,
          Ariel Unnie

Glorysquest

@Nash_Writes97 No I won't take it negatively, like I mentioned in disclaimer that you can rectify my mistakes and its completely alright. I will surely rectify my grammatical mistakes.
            
            Thank you for pointing out.
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Echoes_Of_FanFiction

https://www.wattpad.com/story/376652906 ?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm _content=story_info&wp_page=story_details _button&wp_uname=Echoes_Of_FanFiction
          
          Hey sweeties this is not my new story, for some reason I had to delete the story and my ID due to which I lost my followers and views, please read it and support it

Glorysquest

@Echoes_Of_FanFiction I will check it out
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