~Your book - 'The Good Girl and her Cigarettes~
I mean, this book has potential. It really does.
I stumbled upon this book thinking it would be cool; something different from what I write myself, and also what I read. However this book isn't at all what I expected.
This is something I would have written a year ago when I had no idea how books worked.
The grammar is terrible, the chapters are short because you get to your point too quickly.
I would happily take this book of your hands, and give you credit for what you HAVE written...