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Season 4 of the umbrella academy is soooooo dog shit. 

lizziepaquett

Hi,
          
          Just read your chilling castle excerpt, and my skin’s still prickling. That opening—"(Y/n)’s eyes flew open. The room silent save for the crackling fire..."—instantly hooked me. The way you build dread through sensory details (cold floors, flickering sconces, the "thread tugging her downward") is masterful. I couldn’t stop visualizing:
          
          The dying phone light slicing through darkness, then blacking out at 70% — pure nightmare fuel
          
          Silent panels of (Y/n) pressing her ear to the door, boots echoing in stone corridors
          
          The dungeon descent — shadows swallowing stairwells, whispered "(Y/n)..." bleeding into jagged lettering
          
          Color as tension: Fire’s amber glow vs. phone’s sterile blue vs. crushing void-black
          
          Your horror thrives on absence:
          
          Empty frames where something should be
          
          Sound design via typography (whispers as fractured text)
          
          Claustrophobic layouts (tight panels on creaking floors, widening to dungeon abyss)
          That "bloomed fully into dread" line? Perfect for a visual reveal.
          
          I’m a commissioned artist specializing in horror comics, and I’d love to adapt this. No pressure—your atmospheric tension and that brutal phone-death moment are begging for ink and shadow.
          
          Interested? Message me on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let’s make readers sleep with the lights on.
          
          Best,
          Lizzie

Kiss_craft3

Gotham S1-5: Harvey Bullock love story 
          Name: America Petite Gerald ( bullock in s4)
          Age: 29
          Birthday: February 14,1999
          Height: 5'0 
          Play by: Lungelihle Zwane aka Uncle waffles 
          https://pin.it/7oFvOWgrK
          
          Personality: Sweet, soft spoken, truthful, determined, hardworking, crazy, creative, sarcastic, sassy, selfless, peacemaker, loyal,and trustworthy.
          
          Occupation: works at the GCPD Detective/ chemist/ artist/ soon lieutenant in season 3. 
          
          Hobbies: writing poetry, drawing, working, painting, knitting, reading, cooking, baking, learning languages, solving crimes, and hanging out with her pet
          
          Background 
          America grew up in New Orleans but moved to Gotham at 17, and her parents died in a car accident. She had a 6.8 GPA in 9 grade that moved her to grades faster and graduated in senior year. She was a prodigy in mathematics, science, chemistry, engineering, chemistry, software development, music, art, culinary,  gymnastic, and criminal investigation. She joined at the age of 23 and got a partner with Harvey Bullock, who didn't like her but slowly liked her, and soon it became love, but they kept it hidden. She is friendly with Don maroni and Don falcone as closest friends for years. She saved them in a fire, and they paid them their lives, but she never took advantage of it and rarely asked for favors Unless it was an emergency. Her best friends were Lee Thompson, Selina-Kyle, and Fish Mooney. They all became her friends and Bruce and Alfred. especially her parents, who gave her a mansion in their will, including all of their money, cars, and land. She can wear what she wants as long it is appropriate for work.
          
          Outfit
          https://pin.it/54XwptI8z
          Car
          https://pin.it/3hjeMO2Sn
          Pet( Piglet)
          https://pin.it/3dIEzXsoB
          House 
          https://pin.it/1khRnQx5f
          
           She lets Selina-Kyle and Ivy sleep in her house with shelter, medicine, clothing, food, drinks, entertainment, company, and hiding. 
          
          

FutureDrakescrotum

uh, I basically came from a different site. I don't have any books that you put on your reading list or anything so don't worry about that. I was just going to say that your stuff is pretty good :)

FutureDrakescrotum

you're welcome :)
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IsabelleFarias805

Hi. I was honestly waiting for a Nathan Bratt x reader fanfic. I am kinda simping for Nathan Bratt. I know you are probably busy on other stories, but I wanted to tell you that I'm looking forward to reading the goosebumps fanfic. Take your time.