jj-giggles
Your story sucks.First of all,walang chemistry yung characters.Second,masyadong O.A. yung mga lines nila.Third,hindi mapapansin yung story mo kasi ang panget ng cover.Fourth,masyadong cliché yung plot(yung buong story,i mean)at yung title(readers tend to read stories na title palang maganda na)I'm not saying this para panghinaan ka ng loob at mawalan ng confidence sa pagsusulat,I'm saying this para mag-upgrade ka.I'm not a writer tho,kaya shut up na lang ako(haha).
jj-giggles
@Victoria_Kyeopta I dont think,ia-update mo pa yung story mo but I'm just stating my opinion.lol.