GodishalaSiddartha

Hello . My dear readers and subscribers to my story 
          	
          	Karna : a different path 
          	
          	And comment down here in the latest chapter was uploaded the doubts u has about the new chapter 
          	
          	Characters and the mysterious man

Sandeepgoku

Hey author who will be karn teacher  in your book

GodishalaSiddartha

@Sandeepgoku who was none other than rudra sisya of treta
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Sandeepgoku

@Sandeepgoku who will be his future teacher then ?
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GodishalaSiddartha

@Sandeepgoku until now who taught him was all his teachers 
            
            M wantedly his first teacher made him enter the forest where he formed alliance and learned as the student under them 
            
            
            And to the matter two facts 
            
            Vasusena master of crafts man just like hus grand dad vishwa karma the father in law of surya .
            
            
            And the final one was M was the most powerful than gods itself 
            
            And no matter how much power vasu gains M always upper than him 
            
            
            In his all things 
            
            
            He lived more than dynasties and Yuga's itself ..
            
            
            He was one the who was the all the knowledge in existence than the gods itWlf 
            
            
            Just below the trimurtis itself 
            
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            But M and his wife was just a fragments of a soul than their true self .
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SKumaran2

Bro I read it , but still not completed yet , but i question why so much grey shade for vidur

GodishalaSiddartha

@SKumaran2 i hope u read out yama interaction with mandavya rishi 
            
            And the curse on his son .
            
            And at the start of the story i said with the restart of the time and destiny 
            
            Things change on a darker turn 
            
            In this epic many new characters will take place in the second most dangerous war .
            
            
            And in this epic the universe was taken by darkness by that inner hatred. Will came out in the most disgusting way .
            
            
            Because the demons who i mention will be feeding on the people darkness 
            
            
            Like our kaliyug how kali feeds and sustains by out inner venom on others
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Raijin1996

Hello my friend. 
          
          I know this might seem odd to you but I read your story a bit. Didn't leave votes or comments but I did read it. 
          
          The reason why I did so is because while your heart is in right place your execution leaves much to be desired. Grammatical and spelling mistakes, Odd editing and few other things that make your story in readable. 
          
          So here's me offering myself to be your beta-reader. Just send every chapter in word format and within 4-5 days I'll beta-reader it and correct it as much as possible. 
          
          In my start I have no support so here's me trying to do what I wished others have done to me. 
          
          If you wish to move forward... Reply ASAP

Raijin1996

@GodishalaSiddartha
            Where's the entire story man?
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GodishalaSiddartha

@Raijin1996 hello
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Raijin1996

@GodishalaSiddartha Hello?
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Hot_land_night

Hii Thank you Soo much for reading my stories please give my new story Blood and Betrayal a try.
          
          Chandra was meant to be a king but he was only 5 years old when his father he was kill.
          
          The last thing his maa said to him was revenge, he had to live in a village for 28 years but he didn't forget, he learned how to fight with a acharya.
          
          Every night before sleeping he was thinking for revenge, he will do anything and everything for it.
          
          He was ready to do whatever for this and when he needed to marry a rajkumari named Aanandini he didn't think twice.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390119652?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Hot_land_night
          
          Thanks

GodishalaSiddartha

Hey guys .
          
          I recently updated the next chapter about vidura chap 24 
          Yesterday night 
          
          I guess u all must be busy attending either u schools ,colleges , university or most likely 
          Jobs , travelling with ur family .
          
          And I don't want to disturb ur private quality time .
          
          And pls have spare time to read my stories 
          
          And comment down here how u feel about the chapters  u came across 
          
          And also u can mention ur suggestions in my story 
          
          
          And I will try to make them work in some way possible 
          
          
          And comment down here that how was the chapter 
          
          And what are parts u like most