GodofVoidanddeath

If someone can help me with the story I am writing that would be good it helps me update faster 

GodofVoidanddeath

I have come to a conclusion that this story needs some minor and major changes just after arriving at camp half blood however you the reader gets to pick who witnesses Naruto and the siblings arrive but I have decided that only clarisse la rue can be picked form sea of monsters if you so choose only because I really don't know how to have over 30 people arrive and individually described it form there view also criticism is appreciated

GodofVoidanddeath

Ok so anyone who reads this I got so bored I broke one of my writing rules wiring on my phone so I would appreciate it if you can send me some tips for when I get my new 2 in one tablet or laptop or desktop please let me know if you think my story hollow lizard is good or not