TIMEMASTER101

Now you had read this far, what are your thoughts on the stort so far? Make a rate of between 1-10 stars, then a review with around 100 words, less or more if you want.

Gohan_Grey

@TIMEMASTER101 This is quite an unexpected demand  but I do rate it 10/10 so far especially how the story itself gives a consistent hype when you need it and the satisfaction that makes the reader ourselves comment it out lmao especially regarding the fights when we want this character to win, and to be honest this is by far one of THE best Sci Fi reads I have ever come across, so keep going because we are waiting for updates, dont starve us
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Valkryiez

Hello friends. Would you be willing to help me improve my story or review the "United Terran in Luminarum" story?
          You could give a simple review with this parameter:
          1. Style, 2. grammar, 3. story, 4. character, and 5. overall story. 
          
          Your review will be the evaluation for the next chapter. Thank you.

Gohan_Grey

@Valkryiez I can probably be of help with regarding the grammar
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