RedKing7777

Excuse me.

RedKing7777

Ok
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Gohan_Grey

@RedKing7777 Oh hello there, well sure it's fine for me to help you out or give some suggestions, it's not the first time I've done this, as I've helped out some authors just like VarouKnight, the author of Gate x NHS Thus the Galactic Imperium enforce peace, it's basically a mashup of GATE, Nihonkoku Shoukan and the game Stellaris, I have helped him brainstorm on what to put on his story's chapters for the plot and all lol
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RedKing7777

Nice to meet you, I'm the author of the Great Hania Empire. I would like to say that what I do here is for fun, and of course, getting more views and performances. Would you help me improve my stories? Thank you.
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Valkryiez

Hello friends. Would you be willing to help me improve my story or review the "United Terran in Luminarum" story?
          You could give a simple review with this parameter:
          1. Style, 2. grammar, 3. story, 4. character, and 5. overall story. 
          
          Your review will be the evaluation for the next chapter. Thank you.

Gohan_Grey

@Valkryiez I can probably be of help with regarding the grammar
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