@Golden_ape I can reread the atlantis files for you and see where I can help. I feel like what matters most is having the passion and falling in love with your own story, so your book will be great man.
I would love some constructive criticism about my story. I feel like it needs improvement. however I feel like it is the ugly baby affect . I think it is a beautiful baby until I walk outside with it, and people run the other away in fear. @Bronilaw