Goldeon666

Hey readers I have aSonicXSliver story i want to write but I don't know how it to start it. I'm hoping for some ideas. Here's my plot line.
          	
          	Darkened Love-
          	In the future Dark Sonic is the dominant personality, so Silver creates an amulet he believes will control Dark.
          	Having finished the Amulet he goes to the past giving it to Sonic as a gift, deciding to stick around and insure the amulet works he hangs put with Sonic. Eventually falling in love, Sonic and even Dark began to enjoy the attention Silver is giving and soon they began to date.
          	One night Silver is attacked by -Unknown- engaging Sonic giving Dark and opening to take control, Dark courupts the amulet shattering it taking full control and begins to beat the person to near death when Silver manages to gather his strength enough to place a hand on Darks telling him this isn't what he wants.
          	Dark looks Silver in his eyes and sees the truth in Silvers eyes, he lowers his hand from hitting the person and gives Sonic control once more.
          	It's then Silver understands Darks power, and that amulet would never have stopped him, he understood that to control Dark, he needed to show him love.
          	
          	I know it's a bit much but I have no clue how to start this? I want to start in the future with Silver making the amulet. But not sure if I need to put in backstory, how Dark treats the world, or anything else. So all ideas welcomed.

Goldeon666

Hey readers I have aSonicXSliver story i want to write but I don't know how it to start it. I'm hoping for some ideas. Here's my plot line.
          
          Darkened Love-
          In the future Dark Sonic is the dominant personality, so Silver creates an amulet he believes will control Dark.
          Having finished the Amulet he goes to the past giving it to Sonic as a gift, deciding to stick around and insure the amulet works he hangs put with Sonic. Eventually falling in love, Sonic and even Dark began to enjoy the attention Silver is giving and soon they began to date.
          One night Silver is attacked by -Unknown- engaging Sonic giving Dark and opening to take control, Dark courupts the amulet shattering it taking full control and begins to beat the person to near death when Silver manages to gather his strength enough to place a hand on Darks telling him this isn't what he wants.
          Dark looks Silver in his eyes and sees the truth in Silvers eyes, he lowers his hand from hitting the person and gives Sonic control once more.
          It's then Silver understands Darks power, and that amulet would never have stopped him, he understood that to control Dark, he needed to show him love.
          
          I know it's a bit much but I have no clue how to start this? I want to start in the future with Silver making the amulet. But not sure if I need to put in backstory, how Dark treats the world, or anything else. So all ideas welcomed.

TanshinaAfrin

Hii, want to f4f, v4v??

Goldeon666

@TanshinaAfrin 
            I mean sure, granted I haven't seen anything you've posted before (to my knowledge) so I'll look at your page and read some of your works.
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TanshinaAfrin

@TanshinaAfrin follow 4 follow vote 4 vote
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Goldeon666

@TanshinaAfrin 
            translation?
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Goldeon666

Hey I was wondering if someone could read one of my OC and give me some feed back, I could really use some but no one seems to be reading it so I don't know if it's any good. Its called Zombie Apocolyps, I made it in High School for a college entry but I really need some opinions.

AbbyGenty

@Goldeon666 that's good.
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Goldeon666

@AbbyGenty 
            yeah I'm going to be doing a lot of re-writing to it, but I wanted to get feedback so I knew where to fix things
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AbbyGenty

@Goldeon666 Some of your paragraphs are to long and need to be spaced out properly. And your chapters are to short maybe make them about 2-3 thousand words long i make mine roughly 6,000 or more words for my stories. Maybe put a bit more detail in the characters and their surrounding and what their doing or about to do. To give a broader  perspective for them and readers reading your work. So their more immersed and feel like the readers are apart of your story. Just my opinion though but it's your story so do what ya wish so far it's ok but just me in liking longer stories so to each there own.
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Goldeon666

Hey followers I need help trying to type one of my fics. would one of you be willing to set aside some time to help me out? I tried asking my GF for help but that went up in flames. The fic I'm working on is "Can They Be Trusted"

Goldeon666

@Monntiger 
            No, its a ROTG. But I am working on some more Drarry's
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Monntiger

@Goldeon666 okay ☺ is it like a Drarry?
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Goldeon666

@Monntiger 
            I'm basically having the voice thats been in his head be Fearlings. They start taking over his body in a nutshell, His Bones, muscles, skin stretching much longer then normally possible as his nails grow in length in an unnatural way as his eyes will become black with almost like a gold mixed with ice blue ring cat eye slit, and his teeth growing longer and sharper.
            But my problem is I have no idea how to describe the pain hes going through, so I'm hoping someone can. You'll obviously get a mention in the story since its your idea.
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Goldeon666

Looking for a fic! TW for Abuse and R@pe
          
          The first one, I *think* it takes place before and during 6th year. Snape rescues Draco from his father at Malfoy Manner because Lucius was beating Draco (I believe it's because he refused to take the Mark), Snape took Draco to Harry's place at the Dursley's, aharry grudgingly let him stay as long as the Dursley's didn't find out. After Snape leaves, Harry helps patch Draco up, then Vernon comes home, Harry has Draco hide in his closet, then Draco watches (in horror) as Harry is beaten half to death, Draco calls Snape who takes them to a safe house. They spend the rest of the summer there, at first arguing, then slowly bonding after going clubbing and helping each other with night terrors. They form a Bond as the summer goes. Snape refuses to tell Dumbledore where they are (Dumbledore is bad in this fic, Ron is also not so good) and when they return to school, Draco is given his own rooms for his safety, Harry spends most of his time there as he's being bullied by Ron and others for being with Draco. Dumbledore tries to threaten Harry if he keeps sleeping anywhere other than his dorm, something happens (can't remember what) and Harry is suddenly staying with Draco full time. Hermione came by at one point to get the full story, then she came back another time because Ron hit her. Other stuff happens, then Harry gets kidnapped, Lucius rapes him, Draco can feel what's happening due to their bond, then Harry is rescued, Voldy is defeated, yay.

Monntiger

@Goldeon666 if you want to☺
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Goldeon666

@Monntiger 
            So I don't think it actually exists I may have dreamt it. But if your still interested I could always write it.
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Monntiger

@Goldeon666 is don't know it but if you clock on a tag on a story of the word Drarry it will take you to a list of the stories, please let me know if you find it I would like to read it
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Goldeon666

help, I can't find a story.
          its a Snarry/Drarry and later Tomarry, Mpreg
          Harry is mute due to a spell Tom created but Albus-to many names used, he turns to the dark side and eventually he gets his voice back, but I can't find it or remember the name