Edric_Blight

@Goldirc- it is actually very simple.
            
            You wanna be a little more descriptive and refrain from using "ly"s.
            
            For example:
            
            Non-fixed: "I forgot..." she says grimly.
            
            Fixed: "I forgot about that..." she sighs, her expression grim.

@the_mystery_medic Tell me

@Goldirc- umm...
            
            
            
            
            
            
            I am also bad reader
            
            
            
            
            Oh but I have a dialog hack that makes things run less smoothly so readers need to go through every single line properly.