Hey I've never got the chance to tell you about Everlasting, so here goes nothing!
I am really impressed with the way you present the main character as an egocentric bitch (forgive me if I don't catch the names - I have problems with that!), and the way that she toys with the emotions of her boyfriend and her 'lover' is presented SO WELL. I've never loved and hated a character so well. The description of your story kind of gave me a wrong idea of the story, and so did the cover. The description made me think that the main girl was recovering from the death of both her parents (I was so wrong!), and the cover made me think the title was "Nothing is Everlasting" instead of only "Everlasting".
You kind of remind me of when I was new to Wattpad :-) not to brag, but my stories were written decently but I had almost no readers except for a friend that introduced me to Wattpad. The difference is that I didn't ask people to read my book :O
I hope everything goes well with this book! :) it has potential, though it is a bit too obvious that Noah will end up with the main girl or something like that lol.
-Christie x
PS: why is the story rated R? lol