:) Fida 'The Brown'

Hey guys. I just posted a short story I'm working on. Give it a try, maybe. Based on a part of my life that's in complete turmoil.

@DoctorKatnissPotter Thanks...I'll be sure to give it a try 

@Batmans_Seceret_Scar No problem...you too!

Hi Guys...just posted a few parts of my book...check it out and please tell me what you think...be as harsh as you need to be :)

@_GirlInTheStars_ Hey...thanks...i have become well acquainted with wattpad however i still dont understand the whole how to get a critique concept...would be a lot of help if you could explain :)