GoodBoyT

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Part 4
          	
          	
          	Last thing... Pairings... 
          	Incest and Pedophilia Isn't fucking cool!
          	 ItachixNaruto
          	
          	Itachi killed the 1 of the two people he love while he watch the other die wrongfully. Assuming he was gay, that a different story.
          	Sasuke is the only reason he wanted to continue to live basically.
          	 
          	SasukexNaruto
          	
          	I understand even the voice actors wanted SasuNaru.
          	
          	MeixNaruto
          	Bitch...
          	
          	TsunadexNaruto
          	Oh my fucking Yeezus. 38 year gap.
          	
          	
          	
          	Narutox Kushina 
          	Is this a fetish? Inbred is not cool.
          	 
          	
          	
          	Explain a Harem... More women, don't make you powerful.
          	
          	But some depth into your ships. Doesn't't matters if it's smoking crack.
          	Love at first sight usually ends in heartbreak and betrayal doesn't exist.
          	OC who comes out of nowhere doesn't quite fit into shit. Sex is not everything... Unless you kinky. 
          	The Uchiha believed that nobody but there own was worthy of there love... NOT YOUR FUCKING OC.
          	Of course, OC's can be cool. MARY-Sues need to fuck off.
          	
          	If you going to write in English, stop all of these sentence in Japanese!
          	 A little bit of phases is cool but otherwise, shut up.
          	
          	There, Their and They're. Learn it.
          	Your and You're. Learn that too.
          	
          	Don't get me wrong. It's so many authors with talent and I APPLAUD YOU. But some are just asshole who don't care.
          	
          	
          	Get the w T out!

sad-bhabie

MY WHOLE CHILDHOOD IS IN YOUR BG

sad-bhabie

Ohhh yayy ;-;
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GoodBoyT

@dxddysgoddess I'm not subtracting only adding
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sad-bhabie

Noo lol it's hard asf especially with the Naruto mix
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GoodBoyT

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Part 4
          
          
          Last thing... Pairings... 
          Incest and Pedophilia Isn't fucking cool!
           ItachixNaruto
          
          Itachi killed the 1 of the two people he love while he watch the other die wrongfully. Assuming he was gay, that a different story.
          Sasuke is the only reason he wanted to continue to live basically.
           
          SasukexNaruto
          
          I understand even the voice actors wanted SasuNaru.
          
          MeixNaruto
          Bitch...
          
          TsunadexNaruto
          Oh my fucking Yeezus. 38 year gap.
          
          
          
          Narutox Kushina 
          Is this a fetish? Inbred is not cool.
           
          
          
          Explain a Harem... More women, don't make you powerful.
          
          But some depth into your ships. Doesn't't matters if it's smoking crack.
          Love at first sight usually ends in heartbreak and betrayal doesn't exist.
          OC who comes out of nowhere doesn't quite fit into shit. Sex is not everything... Unless you kinky. 
          The Uchiha believed that nobody but there own was worthy of there love... NOT YOUR FUCKING OC.
          Of course, OC's can be cool. MARY-Sues need to fuck off.
          
          If you going to write in English, stop all of these sentence in Japanese!
           A little bit of phases is cool but otherwise, shut up.
          
          There, Their and They're. Learn it.
          Your and You're. Learn that too.
          
          Don't get me wrong. It's so many authors with talent and I APPLAUD YOU. But some are just asshole who don't care.
          
          
          Get the w T out!

GoodBoyT

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Part 3
          
          
          Another thing, Attention salty Half-assers (A.K.A Ignorant Writers) and Good Authors.
          
          You will receive criticism of all kind.
          
          You will receive compliments.
          
          You will receive haters.
          
          Don't be a little bitch because 
          
          1. You signed up for this shit.
          2. You are sensitive to insensitivity.
          3. You signed up for this shit.
          
          Be smart to remarks and subtle.
          
          Ex. You story sucks and I hope you die!
          
          What not to do.
          "You know what, I can't do this anymore. Even though, I receive one comment about my life because that was to right and it was SOOOO deep. I have to delete  my whole story! Sorry for others who enjoy."
          
          What to do.
          Laugh, Block if necessary, Keep moving on.
          If you like me, Post something smart.
          
          "Thank you! The Author appreciate your IMPORTANT comment. Have a nice day!"
          
          I understand harassment that's different story. But being mad, because of one measly comment ... Come on, Man.
          
          

GoodBoyT

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Part 2
          
          
          If you look at Statistics, Naruto Isn't stronger than Sasuke. (And I believe he never was.)
          Okay, I get it giving him a little powers it cool and shit. However, making him invincible...isn't cool. Characters need a struggle in life and shit. Being a Jackass back to people isn't worthy of my time. Being Nice and sarcastically quiet is cool. 
          
          Example. Naruto Abandonment story.
          Mito sneered at the blonde.
          "You think you're so cool. Well let me tell you something," The short princess twists her crimson hair whilst tip -toeing around Naruto, "You are nothing. I was love meanwhile you were 
          kicked off to the side."
          
          The eldest nuisance looks at unable to become fazed by the empty manipulation process. He then proceeds to not give a damn and stroll the door leaving a steaming Mito behind.  
          
          ...See what I mean?
          Naruto didn't't say Jack-shit and he still bested her. And I can't fit it in here but have a confilct.
          
          Man vs Man
          Man vs Society
          Man vs Nature
          Man vs Himself
          
          Remember these.
          
           

GoodBoyT

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Warning... I am a bit biased and hypocritical.
          Also I cussed a lot.
          
          
          If you take offense... Then I'm talking about you.
          
          
          
          
          
          I...want to give a huge FUCK YOU to all of the shitty grammar mistakes and OP Writers. Now I understand that things slip by people and that writing a story is hard. Thinking of a good structure plot Isn't easy.
           However, shitty writers who don't give a fuck, making my ass dizzy from just looking at it. No quotation marks, Misuses of commas, jumbled up bullshit. Spelling Problems? Okay maybe once or twice but... Not the whole article my dude. Repetitive word use... Look in a thesaurus or something. 
          If you are trying have a little Ebonics or Patois writing with it that cool. Damn near illiterate, I APPLAUD you for trying.
          Brain not processing properly, again I APPLAUD you. Auto-correct fucking you up, that's cool. Turn that shit off.
          
           If English is not your first, second, third or fifty-eight languages that cool. But being a DICK to good writers names needs to go. Stop it. Get some help. #MJ
          And OP-ers too. 
          
          Y'all ain't slick, I was coming for that ass. I swear. If you look up some Naruto or whatever fandom you look at most of them make the Character OP as FUCK. I mean, come on man. I read a  Naruto fanshi- I mean fanfic that said Naruto was fucking faster that Minato to WITH The Hiraishin and strong than God themselves...Bih.
          Part one.
          

GoodBoyT

Aright... T done deleted their stories so any Ideas for stories?!
          
          Naruto (Scenarios or Adventure)
          Dbz or Super (No scenarios nor match up)
          TMNT
          CREEPYPASTA (Reader)
          Or T Netflix and grt inot a fandom
          
          
          
          Or/And
          
          
          
          
          
          Give T ideas for a nonfan story. 
          
          GoodBoiT out