Seconds: tips about writing
- Since English isn’t your first language, the best tip I can give you is to keep practicing, and don’t get discouraged! My first book was so bad I took it down when I started writing my current fanfics. Everything about it was terrible lol but it was really good practice for me. Writing takes a lot of practice, and reading more stories in English will help you get that practice as well.
- You do a good job of making characters with unique personalities, and it comes through in your writing. Something that would help really send it home is sticking with one style. For example, most of your chapters are written with the paragraphs starting on the left side of the page. In chapter 3 you go back and forth between the paragraphs being on the left, to being centered on the page. Switching back and forth like that can make it a little harder to follow.
- Otherwise, just grammar and punctuation that will come with practice! My first book had like 3 periods and 106792 commas I swear I use Grammarly when I write, hopefully there’s still a free version of it. My page still lights up red, I spend a lot of time editing
I hope this helps! It means a lot to me that you asked for tips, I think that’s really cool! Keep writing, I’m excited to watch you grow!! ❤️
(Sorry, I had to split this in half cause Wattpad said it was too long rip)