Goraah
Hello dear readers! Did you miss me? I'm back with a new part of "Together with you": "Reading Day"!!!
Goraah
Awesammon17
Hi. I started replying to things I missed. I am procrastinating from writing and appreciate your cooperation. I don't know if u get notified about conversations. I should just put it in skype......?
nimanja
Hey! Just fired! Check it out! (❁´◡`❁)=￣ω￣=ヾ(≧ ▽ ≦)ゝ
(ﾟヮﾟ) https://www.wattpad.com/story/371592337-smile-%F0%93%82%80
Violet_2106
Hi, Goraah! Remember me? Due to some stuff, I had lost my previous account so I had to make a new one, so yeah... I also started writing my story again because I didn't like how it was before. Anyway, Love your new chapters, can't wait for more! So, yeah. Just wanted to say hi!
Violet_2106
@Goraah Haha, I though so, but don't worry! I wasn't kidnapped by a handsome man or something(although I would like to) lol. I'm gonna be writing lots of new stuff, so be sure to check it out hehe!
Goraah
@Violet_2106 Hi, back. I admit that I was worried when you disappeared all of a sudden. Im glad you're back.
nimanja
Hey! I'm publishing my first story. A Weilan one. If you have time, please check on it.✍️(◔◡◔)(❁´◡`❁)(づ￣ 3￣)づ
https://www.wattpad.com/story/361055831-the-longing-butterfly
Awesammon17
Sent u a message. I don't have access to my PC for sme days
Goraah
@Awesammon17 Please, don't worry, hon. Just focus on Your safety and health. Wishing You all the best.
Awesammon17
Thank you for following me. : )
Awesammon17
Hello Goraah,
I hope all is well with you considering your extreme work schedule.
I want to know your opinion.
I have so many errors in my story, mostly punctuation, but some more glaring. Plus I don't like the ending and want to add and delete some things. When I correct the chapters I have to publish them so it will look like they were all published at the same time. I don't know how/if that matters to anyone. The errors bug me. Do you think it makes a difference if all the chapters look like they were published at the same time?
I started another story as a prequel covering the possession and take over of the underground by the ghost that got Yezun, and how the war was stopped. It seems I have more interest in the story than my 2nd book.
Awesammon17
@Awesammon17 Thanks for your reply. You are so experienced and I think you are the best writer, so I will go with your opinion. All AI editors like to squash our unique ways of writing things : P. I use "ignore" a lot when Google Doc makes suggestions. It doesn't understand us humans. I used to edit things at school and write for its newspaper, so I am pretty good except for spelling. big words. : / . I probably should use email next time, not conversation. Anyone can read these. : | I'm a little embarrassed. . . but happy you answered me! YAY! Kind regards, Mary.
Goraah
@Awesammon17 Hello. Thank You for trusting me with this, though I don't know if I'm the most qualified person to answer, but I'll do my best. I think it won't matter to any readers if You edit Your work and post it again. Grammarly insists that to edit is divine, so let's trust them ;) I reedited my first work gazilion times and never heard a word of complaints from anyone. I think tis community undesstands perfectly the need to change and fix things. Perhaps, if You are worried about it, writing a short info about the edit in the synopsis would ease Your mind. I have read plenty of stories with multiple edits, so to me it's only natural to go for it. I envy You so much that you can spot Your mistakes (if You insist there are any) I quarrel louly with Grammarly each time it underlines any words and phrases I choose. ( I use only the free version) I can't wait to read the prequel. You made my day revealing that You're writing it. And I apologise, but that happiness makes me not sorry that Weilan won with Your second book fro now. Maybe next month, right? Good luck with editting and writing, both fanfic and Your book. Best wishes Ania
Awesammon17
Hi, I've had these two plot bunnies in my head since reading ShenWeiLighning's Plum Blossoms.
What if there was an ancient book reference or hint or rumor about Kunlun's whip and they go searching for it.?
Or, could Shen Wei and Da Qing or Kunlun himself help Zhao learn talismans? I always liked him being a talisman and riddle master. ?
I thought it was very nice that Lightning gave him those things from the novel.
Well, just 2 ideas,.....
Goraah
@Awesammon17 hi. Thank You for the idea. I have been playing with the thought of the whip for some time (and yes, Plum Blossoms helped with that.) I'm not sure it would fit with where my stories are going right now, but they might appear in the final chapters (I actually have the great finale half written, though for now I'm obviously not going to post it) there will be many plot twists and the talismans would make an appearance
