@Gothicwriter24
Hi! Should I post more paragraphs every now and again here? I'll be planning a chapter next week/in a few days depending on when I get time and that's usually when I'll try and write the last paragraph to figure out the ending, so it would be good if I could have some feedback on whether you would be interested in that!
I've just written a paragraph I'm really happy with, so since it's quite a few chapters away from what I've published of We All Have Rotten Cores, I thought I'd put it here for you to read. Please recommend any changes I can make!
The hollow air grew stale, set in stone, yet flowing around Ernsta as the castle formed itself stone by stone among the fog, weaving hollow echoes between each new scratch forming as a sword was dropped in some distant time in some distant battle as a soldier perished – but none of it happened; the stairs were hollow of footprints, untouched and deterring people from ever climbing them, ever giving them purpose. They were smoothed down, however, as if by weathering that had never happened, and steps that had never been made, armour never set down and weapons never bloodied. The fog still seemed to gather each stone around her, forming new stairs, smoothed by rain that had never fallen, yet was falling now, despite the fact it never would. The only thing Ernsta could see were the stairs, the fog obscuring everything else that could be there. There was a hollow feeling that accompanied it, however, a light feeling, yet a dreary, woebegone cry of falling angels echoing with remorse and apologies never said. As if someone were perpetually falling from the stairs, conscious yet inert, limp, paralysed to even cry – yet the wails of falling angels continued to echo, unsaid, unheard. Some part of her wanted to stay there and listen, but she wandered through the empty, towering fortress, oppressive walls seeming to stare down with disdain, mocking her every step toward the staircase encircling the outer wall of an infinitely large room. Like a moth she turned away, avoiding it, never quite getting close to the obscured light but fleeing toward it. As if it were some exit. As if there were an exit in the infinitely large yet claustrophobic tower of fog and unanswered questions, unsaid and unasked and unheard.
I've published chapter 3 on We All Have Rotten Cores! I really hope you enjoy reading it, as it expands a bit more on Ernsta's life and specifically her job, and it was one of the ones I most enjoyed writing. I tend to have a buffer few chapters so when I've finished chapter seven, I'll add another chapter!
Happy Pride Month! I hope you enjoy the rest of the month as an ally supporting the LGBTQIA+ community, or celebrating your identity; we accept you no matter who you are!
Hi! I just wanted to ask what you thought of the new cover for We All Have Rotten Cores, as I just finished it and can make quick improvements if necessary - anything like the title being unreadable or it being unclear; please let me know, as feedback is appreciated!
The prologue for We All Have Rotten Cores is out! I hope you guys like it as I have some more chapters being written now (planning chapter three currently) and I'm really enjoying the historical research for this book. Comment any feedback when you read it, as that helps me to improve!
Hi! I just wanted to let you guys know that I'm working on a new book currently as I just publish the remaining chapters on ripples of grief. It just needs a little editing and I think you'll really enjoy reading the ending. The new book will be called "We all have rotten cores", and I'm looking forward to showing it to you when there's enough buffer chapters!
A new chapter on Ripples of Grief has just been published! I hope you guys like the new book cover for it; I wasn't really sure whether I liked the old one, so I thought I'd try redesigning it in the style I used to do. I'd really like some feedback on it, so any replies or comments are much appreciated!
Ripples of Grief just hit 70, 000 words! Thank you so much for reading it and voting, and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!
A new chapter for Ripples of Grief has been published! The book will take about a month more to finish, so I look forward to writing about some new ideas,; but I'll be sad to finish this project, as I've really enjoyed writing it so far. I hope you've enjoyed reading it and that you have a nice day!
