@Graceline1234
Hey cutie! Thank you for the your vote and for checking out my story really means the world! ❤️
I was wondering if you could share your thoughts and opinions about it, I'm still kinda new to this whole writing thing and I'm open to all sorts of criticism!
Rain.
HI! I was wondering if you wanted to check out my new story, The Last Daemon, and give me some feedback. I would really appreciate if you gave it a look but if not, no worries!
https://my.w.tt/kDeV7YU4SY
@Graceline1234 I just looked at your story and I thought it was a great first chapter! I loved the tide pods reference!
@BreaNight11 I would love to! I just read the first couple chapters and I really enjoyed it. It was really nice and well thought out! I liked your description a lot as well! Keep up the good work! Make sure to check out my story if you already havnt, "The Mafia Dons Daughter"
Hey!
Would you mind checking out my story and letting me know what you thought?
Any comments/ pointers/ tips to improve my writing would be so greatly appreciated <3
https://www.wattpad.com/story/194750216-the-commander-of-orion
@Lilly_Orchid I read over it and I really enjoyed your story. Your a fantastic writer, I love how well you are at describing things and situations. I cant wait to read the next chapter!