Arnielys

Hey sorry if this seems weird but I saw you added my story on your reading list and I was wondering if you could give me some feedback and tell me how is it, since I added some new parts and I needed someone to tell me how its sounding, I tried making a slowburn tension but I really dont know how is coming out.

Gracie607838

Hii, sorry I’m just now reading but I liked it and how it wasn’t like rushed and didn’t take to long to get to the point but it’s coming out good so far 
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