GrapesFunction

I've decided to edit the 2 chapters I posted because they don't align with the plot I have in mind. When I previously made the story Mystery Man it was a while back and I didn't want to change anything about it, I wanted to use this as a passion project that I would look back on in the future. However now that I'm starting to take this more seriously I've decided to form an actual plot to the story. (Not just cringy romance scenes. Don't worry, you'll see a lot of them, trust me.) 
          	
          	I want to clarify that this is a PLOT HEAVY STORY. Yes there will be many romance scenes throughout the novel but the plot takes the forefront of this story. The things I've changed was mostly all that cringy dialogue that happened in the mc’s mind. I tried to be more descriptive, mostly taking inspiration from the other novels I've read, especially In Black and White I'm Blue by @Summer_SKY_9. (I totally recommend reading this book.) 
          	
          	So yeah that's pretty much it, if you want to not be confused the next time I upload (Which may be next week) please read the chapters again. I'm sorry for doing this to y'all but I had to. Don't worry it'll pay off I swear. 
          	
          	Thank you for supporting my novel and voting on it. It means the world to me that I can actually build a following around my novel. Thank you again!

GrapesFunction

Thank you, good luck on your next novel!
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Summer_SKY_9

@GrapesFunction Thanks for the recommendation love! Your story has so much potential. Good luck with editing :)
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GrapesFunction

I've decided to edit the 2 chapters I posted because they don't align with the plot I have in mind. When I previously made the story Mystery Man it was a while back and I didn't want to change anything about it, I wanted to use this as a passion project that I would look back on in the future. However now that I'm starting to take this more seriously I've decided to form an actual plot to the story. (Not just cringy romance scenes. Don't worry, you'll see a lot of them, trust me.) 
          
          I want to clarify that this is a PLOT HEAVY STORY. Yes there will be many romance scenes throughout the novel but the plot takes the forefront of this story. The things I've changed was mostly all that cringy dialogue that happened in the mc’s mind. I tried to be more descriptive, mostly taking inspiration from the other novels I've read, especially In Black and White I'm Blue by @Summer_SKY_9. (I totally recommend reading this book.) 
          
          So yeah that's pretty much it, if you want to not be confused the next time I upload (Which may be next week) please read the chapters again. I'm sorry for doing this to y'all but I had to. Don't worry it'll pay off I swear. 
          
          Thank you for supporting my novel and voting on it. It means the world to me that I can actually build a following around my novel. Thank you again!

GrapesFunction

Thank you, good luck on your next novel!
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Summer_SKY_9

@GrapesFunction Thanks for the recommendation love! Your story has so much potential. Good luck with editing :)
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Summer_SKY_9

Hey wanna do a quick r4r with genuine comments and votes?

GrapesFunction

@Summer_SKY_9 Thanks. I will definitely be added more to it.
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Summer_SKY_9

@GrapesFunction @GrapesFunction Read urs too. Honestly im slightly disappointed only 2 chappies were there to read. Ill be coming back when the rest get updated. Added it to my library :)
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GrapesFunction

@Summer_SKY_9 Hello I just finished and I've got to say I REALLY loved your story. I loved the way you described everything I like seeing a pov type writing format. The way you detailed the feelings of the characters made me understand how they feel way better than any normal story would. The song choices were also very good they really get you in the story.  I will be waiting for the next book. I don't know if you wanted me to comment more because I was getting so into the story that I didn't comment. Also I didn't know what to comment about in certain parts so I don't know if you wanted more comments but that's just a heads up. Overall I loved your story and would love if you could give me feedback.
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