After almost two weeks of correction and rewriting, I can say one thing:
1)The two novels are cringy AF.
Why nobody ever tells me about those horrible mistakes in grammar and history!? My eyes got burn so many times!
2)I think I'll stop writing late at night and after practicing blazblue combos for 7 hours straight. No, wait, I think this one goes for one too... (┳Д┳)
I'll try to upload something soon, I promise, but really, this needs loads of work.