GreatBooski

I had the weirdest dream and I'm thinking of turning it into a book. It's about me and some of my friends trying to find a portal then exploring a weird af haunted house.

GreatBooski

@i_luv_minions it's really really good! But try to add more description. Like sensory images. Like instead of saying "it was raining hard and there was a lot of thunder" you could say, "I could hear the rain pattering the roof, and the thunder was very loud, like gunshots in a fist fight" or something like that. I hope it helps!

__ShiningStars__

@UnderMySleeves Oh well then thx i appreciate it xD Oh and sorry for answering late Im using the school's wi-fi since they disconnected mine =( But thx anyways =)
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