LegendsOfQueen

Hi
          This is the writer of whispers of the forest.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387760591?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=LegendsOfQueen
          
          Since you are experienced in fantasy material, I request you to please go through this and give suggestions.
          
          Your efforts will be highly appreciated.
          Thanking you,
          Sakshi ☺️

LegendsOfQueen

@GreekDemigod4life thanks a lot. I'll keep it in mind
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GreekDemigod4life

@LegendsOfQueen I made a few comments but please don't be disappointed because your imigry is great, but I as a reader have no background of what is going on. A flashback could help better understand the storyline also you, like me, see this vision in your head and sometimes forget to describe things. You're doing great I hope I helped a little bit.
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GreekDemigod4life

@LegendsOfQueen thank you for trusting me I will try my best to leave the suggestions in the comment section
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