GreekRomandemigod

So I need help revamping this prophecy I made for my story RENEGADE. It goes like this 
          	
          	
          	
          	GO SOUTH TO THE ONE IN PAIN,
          	
          	ON THE DAY THAT WILL GIVE OR TAKE ,
          	
          	CREATURES OF CRETACEOUS REBORN,
          	
          	HEIR OF THE SEAS AND CHILD OF LOVE UNITE,
          	
          	A JOURNEY THROUGH WATER HE MUST UNDERGO,
          	
          	TO THE ISLAND OF THE OLD SEA GOD.
          	
          	
          	I’m not good at these kind of things so if someone could help me reword it that would be great!! I’ll let multiple give me options and I shall choose the best option and even put in my story who helped me with this.

GreekRomandemigod

Of course! I messaged you back, thank you for responding to this
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ArtisticDisciple

Can I know a little more about the story, maybe by DM the prophecy you have so far is good it rhymes and flows well 
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GreekRomandemigod

Also I’m changing the story a little so idk what I’m actually doing anymore with it accent for what I already have written of course 
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GreekRomandemigod

So I need help revamping this prophecy I made for my story RENEGADE. It goes like this 
          
          
          
          GO SOUTH TO THE ONE IN PAIN,
          
          ON THE DAY THAT WILL GIVE OR TAKE ,
          
          CREATURES OF CRETACEOUS REBORN,
          
          HEIR OF THE SEAS AND CHILD OF LOVE UNITE,
          
          A JOURNEY THROUGH WATER HE MUST UNDERGO,
          
          TO THE ISLAND OF THE OLD SEA GOD.
          
          
          I’m not good at these kind of things so if someone could help me reword it that would be great!! I’ll let multiple give me options and I shall choose the best option and even put in my story who helped me with this.

GreekRomandemigod

Of course! I messaged you back, thank you for responding to this
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ArtisticDisciple

Can I know a little more about the story, maybe by DM the prophecy you have so far is good it rhymes and flows well 
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GreekRomandemigod

Also I’m changing the story a little so idk what I’m actually doing anymore with it accent for what I already have written of course 
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AnaklusmosX

Thank you for the follow we really appreciate it!

GreekRomandemigod

@Xx_Anaklusmos_xX youre welcome and we ? Whos we ???
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