So I need help revamping this prophecy I made for my story RENEGADE. It goes like this
GO SOUTH TO THE ONE IN PAIN,
ON THE DAY THAT WILL GIVE OR TAKE ,
CREATURES OF CRETACEOUS REBORN,
HEIR OF THE SEAS AND CHILD OF LOVE UNITE,
A JOURNEY THROUGH WATER HE MUST UNDERGO,
TO THE ISLAND OF THE OLD SEA GOD.
I’m not good at these kind of things so if someone could help me reword it that would be great!! I’ll let multiple give me options and I shall choose the best option and even put in my story who helped me with this.