Sara

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
          
          please read until chapter 2 before u decide if you would like to continue reading the story or not :3

Hi! Could you read my story?!?! Plz! I really need some feed back! COOL! 
          
          Prologue… 
          
          215 years. It's been 215 years since I was born. Today is my 215th birthday. Sometimes though I wish that my life had ended 200 years ago. When I look in the mirror, I don't see an old woman. I don't see a young woman. That's just it, I don't see myself at all when I look in the mirror. I'll give you three guesses- what am I? 
          I know what you're thinking. "there is no such thing as vampires. They only exist in myths and legends and the occasional modern fiction novel." 
          Well, you're right, sort of. Vampires as portrayed in horror books, or even romance books, are fiction. But just because some over-creative author portrayed us wrong, we don't exist? Wrong. We do exist. We aren't human. We live forever. Or at least until I was made. 
          I am the exception. 
          
          DO YOU LIKE IT??????????????? YES? NO? THEN READ THE REST!!!!!