Maxibleep
Wallllllly read my new sussy story
GreenZetsu
GreenZetsu
Hello! I am new to Wattpad And I would love some Naruto gamer oc fanfic recommendations! Peace!
i_am_music_criticism
Hello! I hope you're doing well. I'd love it if you could check out my story. No worries if you're unable to, and feel free to delete this message if you need to. Have a great day!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/352777699?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=i_am_music_criticism
GreenZetsu
@i_am_music_criticism Thank you for the feedback! I will take it into consideration! Sorry if it was a little short, I am pretty bad at writing. Thank you very much!
i_am_music_criticism
@GreenZetsu Hey, I took a look at your story, and I think you should consider breaking it up into paragraphs to make it easier to read. That's just my opinion.