LyndarmusAisha
Well hello I just read your stroy and had some thoughts ,first of all I like the child/teen like expressions of thought .She is lost in the forest where death could await but she is more concerned about her clothes getting dirty this leaves us with the danger being minimize while it's right around the corner .Can't wait for more;) but don't stress yourself
Green_Nerd
@LyndarmusAisha Well hello ! Actually, the story is finished, I only post the first chapter to see how people would react but I promise that I will post the rest soon