GregEvets

I just posted the first 1/4 of my latest work-in-progress novel, eMortal. I'm looking for feedback before giving it to my editor. I'd love comments! 
          	
          	Here's a brief description: When an awkward teen programmer enters a contest to create a virtual person, even she can’t believe the results. He is real, sentient, and incredibly…human. But by the time she accepts this, his world is on the cusp of being unplugged.

GregEvets

I just posted the first 1/4 of my latest work-in-progress novel, eMortal. I'm looking for feedback before giving it to my editor. I'd love comments! 
          
          Here's a brief description: When an awkward teen programmer enters a contest to create a virtual person, even she can’t believe the results. He is real, sentient, and incredibly…human. But by the time she accepts this, his world is on the cusp of being unplugged.