Hello everyone!! It’s me again. I know I’ve been gone a long time, so I thank you for all those that still remain and the ones who may yet return. For the past year, I’ve been working hard to finish Moving Along and I’m proud to say that I’ve succeeded. With that there are some changes I made to the original story:
- All the previous chapters have been freshly edited to clean up some inconsistencies and grammar.
- New story elements have been added in order to tell a more cohesive narrative, while any old plot points or dialogue that hindered it, were changed or removed. Not to worry, the original vision for Moving Along remains intact! It’ll feel just as you remember it with some positive changes.
- Sergals have been removed from the story entirely. Sorry to say, but I do not own that closed species, nor would I have the funds to pay for those royalties. To replace them, I changed the species to lions, which I think fits the narrative a lot better anyhow. Won’t spoil the reasons why.
- While the story has ended, I still have further goals to complete before I move on to Project Galaxy entirely. First, I need to write out a very short epilogue for those who wish to see the aftermath of the story. The reason I haven’t released it yet is due to the fact that I’d like everyone to sit on this current ending for a while before the next big reveal. I promise it’ll be worth the wait.
Second, I’ll be reading the story myself, as a reader this time, just one more time to make sure the story is good to be shelved while I work on my new project. I’d hate to leave this story in an inadequate state when you all deserve only the best I can offer.
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Alright that’s enough out of me, I hope you enjoy Moving Along Remastered in its entirety and eagerly await the epilogue that’ll be coming very soon, I promise. Feel free to ask any burning questions you have in the comments below. Archer out!