GreyWolven

I don't know why but every RWBY fanfic always have this :
          	1. Immediately meet with Ozpin
          	2. Ozpin always ask about joining Beacon, strangely we, as reader insert, accept it without doubts
          	3. When someone sad, team RWBY JNPR or Someone good on beacon always rushing hug
          	4. EVERYONE IS YOUNG, ranging between 15-18
          	5. Horny RWBY everytime, easy to blush, except Ruby
          	6. HAREM EVERYWHERE
          	7. When said reader is buff looking, muscular, or anything similar, we look like a twunk
          	8. Complicated outfit, heightened-sense semblance, OP-looking weapon

GreyWolven

@HDAWG007 Most of the things on the list are okay to me. The things that bothered me a little is, Honry Yang everytime 
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HDAWG007

@AloneWolves But, if it makes you feel any better I hate the stories where they either a character bio chapter or when the character’s name is (Y/N). Like it’s not that difficult to come up with a name.
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GreyWolven

I don't know why but every RWBY fanfic always have this :
          1. Immediately meet with Ozpin
          2. Ozpin always ask about joining Beacon, strangely we, as reader insert, accept it without doubts
          3. When someone sad, team RWBY JNPR or Someone good on beacon always rushing hug
          4. EVERYONE IS YOUNG, ranging between 15-18
          5. Horny RWBY everytime, easy to blush, except Ruby
          6. HAREM EVERYWHERE
          7. When said reader is buff looking, muscular, or anything similar, we look like a twunk
          8. Complicated outfit, heightened-sense semblance, OP-looking weapon

GreyWolven

@HDAWG007 Most of the things on the list are okay to me. The things that bothered me a little is, Honry Yang everytime 
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HDAWG007

@AloneWolves But, if it makes you feel any better I hate the stories where they either a character bio chapter or when the character’s name is (Y/N). Like it’s not that difficult to come up with a name.
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MeXagainstXtheXworld

Hey, thanks for following me:)

MeXagainstXtheXworld

@AloneWolves oh you thought they were sample chapters? No no, the whole book is available and free to everyone once they're back up. 
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GreyWolven

@MeXagainstXtheXworld it's okay, I thought it was like you put it down and put a price if you want to read it (idk the right words) , just putting a few chapters as a teaser. 
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MeXagainstXtheXworld

@AloneWolves ohh right! Sorry about that. Some of the chapters are down for editing and are going up bit by bit. Chapter three should be up either today or tomorrow:) sorry about the confusion!
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SaBubbleXZ

thanks for adding my book to your reading list, luv <33

SaBubbleXZ

@AloneWolves i'll try! glad you think it's interesting:)
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GreyWolven

@SaBubbleXZ its interesting tho, Hope you continue it the best your way 
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KozakTheLeopard

Hey thank you for checking out my story

KozakTheLeopard

@AloneWolves Yeah im trying to better myself as a writer, im still working on the book, but its only my second book so i apologize for any issues in it
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GreyWolven

@JakeTheGreenTiger yeah, it is interesting to read. Improvement still needed on the way, but it's all good 
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Brandon_The_Gsd

Hey, i'm from Indonesia too