Time has flown! I realize I released the latest chapter on Easter (oops), so I’m sure it was easy to miss. The following chapter is also already done, but I’m trying to force myself to wait until a week has passed to upload it. Gotta keep some kind of reasonable pacing!
I’m looking forward to any feedback ya’ll want to offer me. I’ve realized that if this were a printed book, it’d be well over 200 pages by now. Is that too slow of a slow burn? What could I cut out?
Maybe if I think of it more like the comic it once was, then I can get an idea of how fast things should move. Drawing takes a lot of time after all, so if it wasn’t important enough to draw then it probably wasnt important enough to write. Thinking I could easily get rid of chapter 2, here. Maybe 10 & 16, also. Idk, what do you think?